Blog Post #4

1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?

   The comments of others had many benefits to improve my English writing skills. 

   First, I felt pleasure when people read my post, and they agreed with my opinion. Also, it was a good thing that I could see different opinions. Second, I was able to reduce many grammar mistakes that I often made. Thanks to the advice of others, I write my posts carefully to reduce mistakes. In addition, I learned a variety of writing skills.
   In brief, It was very helpful to improve English skills.

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?

   Also, there are many good things that the comments I have posted on other blogs. 

   First, I read many informative posts, so I've got a lot of knowledge. Also, It was good to see many different opinions. Second, I learned various and good writing skills of others. I knew that there are so many people with great writing skills. 

    In short, it gave me motivation to learn English.

Final Draft Reasons/Example Paragraph

Vibrant Night of Seoul

   Seoul has 3 factors which provide a good quality of night life.

   First of all, Seoul has convenient public transport at night. Subway and buses run until late at night. For example, 'N26' bus runs until 03:10 am. According to Seoul City’s research, average daily passengers of Seoul night bus service is nearly 6,000 people. Many people are using the late night bus service. In addition, there are many taxis even late at night. Second, Seoul has various spectacle in night. There are many vibrant entertainment districts at night like Hongik University and Myeongdong. For them, midnight is the busiest time of the day. Nice night view is also a good spectacle. Because palace is open at night, you can go there in the night. Palace of night is a magnificent sight that is incomparable to any other. If you go to www.royalpalace.go.kr, you can find a lot of information about opening at night of Gyeongbokgung. A night view of Seoul from Namsan and Han River is also beautiful. Third, there are many facilities of convenience available 24 hours a day. For example, If you want to watch a movie at night, you can go to the theater and watch the late-night movie. If you're hungry late at night, you can eat gimbap and ramen at Gimbap Heaven. Besides, there are many 24 hours facilities like sauna, cafe and karaoke.

   For these 3 reasons, Seoul is the perfect place for people who love to active at night.

Night bus service

Opening at night, Gyeongbokgung

Gimbap Heaven

Reference

Image

Night bus service : 김용운 (2013). 심야버스 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from

http://www.edaily.co.kr/news/NewsRead.edy?SCD=JG31&newsid=01226726603035568&DCD=A00703&OutLnkChk=Y

Gimbap Heaven : 서진 (2013). 김밥천국 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from

http://www.1pagestory.com/bbs/view.php?id=never_blog&no=1056

Opening at night, Gyeongbokgung : 중앙일보 (2013). 경복궁 야간개장 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from

http://news.joins.com/article/11595641/

Article

Jelly hero (2014). 서울시 심야교통을 책임지는 ‘올빼미’버스에 대한 3가지 사실[Online article]. Rretrieved Oct. 17, 2015 from

http://contents.newsjel.ly/issue/seoul_nbus/

Website

Official website of Gyeongbokgung. 경복궁 공식 홈페이지.

http://www.royalpalace.go.kr:8080/

1st Draft Reasons/Example Paragraph Post

Vibrant Night of Seoul

   Seoul has 3 factors which provide a good quality of night life.

   First of all, Seoul has convenient public transport at night. Subway and late night buses run until late at night. For example, 'N26' bus runs until 03:10 am. In addition, there are many taxi even late at night. Second, Seoul has various spectacle in night. There are many vibrant entertainment districts at night like Hongik University and Myeongdong. For them, midnight is the busiest time of the day. Nice night view is also a good spectacle. Because palace is open at night, you can go there in the night. Palace of night is a magnificent sight that is incomparable to any other. A night view of Seoul from Namsan and Han River is also beautiful. Third, there are many facilities of convenience available 24 hours a day. For example, If you want to watch a movie at night, you can go to the theater and watch the late-night movie. If you're hungry late at night, you can eat gimbap and ramen at Gimbap Heaven. Besides, there are many 24 hours facilities like sauna, cafe and karaoke.

   For these 3 reasons, Seoul is the perfect place for people who love to active at night.

 Night bus service

Gimbap Heaven

Opening at night, Gyeongbokgung

Reference

Night bus service : 김용운 (2013). 심야버스 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from

http://www.edaily.co.kr/news/NewsRead.edy?SCD=JG31&newsid=01226726603035568&DCD=A00703&OutLnkChk=Y

Gimbap Heaven : 서진 (2013). 김밥천국 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from
http://www.1pagestory.com/bbs/view.php?id=never_blog&no=1056

Opening at night, Gyeongbokgung : 중앙일보 (2013). 경복궁 야간개장 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from

http://news.joins.com/article/11595641/

EW2-060 Class Review

Final Draft Descriptive Paragraph Post

"My Comfortable Study Room"

   My ideal study room is small and comfortable. There are some requirements for my ideal study room.

   First, It should not be too wide. Small size room give comfort to me. Room size will be about 10~15 square meter.
Second, It should not be too quiet. If it is too quiet, I can't concentrate well. Calm music will help me to concentrate.
The third is a simple interior. Room's wallpaper color is dark ivory color. It will give a relaxing feeling. And little furniture give simple and comfort feeling. There is one desk on the side of the room. On the other side is placed a bed.
Finally, I need a refrigerator filled with Coca-Cola (No Pepsi, only Coca-Cola). Cola makes me feel so good. It will help to Increase my concentration.

   In conclusion, small and simple room is the best place that I can concentrate well.

Coke refrigerator

Reference

Coke refrigerator (2015, May 10). Retrieved (2015, September 26) from http://cocacolakorea.tistory.com/category/STORY/Novelty