Vibrant Night of Seoul
Seoul has 3 factors which provide a good quality of night life.
First of all, Seoul has convenient public transport at night. Subway and late night buses run until late at night. For example, 'N26' bus runs until 03:10 am. In addition, there are many taxi even late at night. Second, Seoul has various spectacle in night. There are many vibrant entertainment districts at night like Hongik University and Myeongdong. For them, midnight is the busiest time of the day. Nice night view is also a good spectacle. Because palace is open at night, you can go there in the night. Palace of night is a magnificent sight that is incomparable to any other. A night view of Seoul from Namsan and Han River is also beautiful. Third, there are many facilities of convenience available 24 hours a day. For example, If you want to watch a movie at night, you can go to the theater and watch the late-night movie. If you're hungry late at night, you can eat gimbap and ramen at Gimbap Heaven. Besides, there are many 24 hours facilities like sauna, cafe and karaoke.
For these 3 reasons, Seoul is the perfect place for people who love to active at night.
Night bus service
Gimbap Heaven
Opening at night, Gyeongbokgung
Night bus service
Gimbap Heaven
Opening at night, Gyeongbokgung
Reference
Night bus service : 김용운 (2013). 심야버스 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from
Gimbap Heaven : 서진 (2013). 김밥천국 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from
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http://www.1pagestory.com/bbs/view.php?id=never_blog&no=1056
Opening at night, Gyeongbokgung : 중앙일보 (2013). 경복궁 야간개장 [Online image]. Rretrieved Oct. 10, 2015 from
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Hello Jae min,
답글삭제Your paragraph is very informative and I could notice many things about Seoul. It was clear and simple to understand. It is good that you stated the example for those reasons and ordering your ideas with transition signals. It will be better to use the other outside sources from the website about how exciting place a Seoul is, at night. Also, it could be better to use phrases like “According to the…” or “Based on the…” to show you are using the outside source. Other than that, your writing is clear and good enough to understand! Thank you :)
Have a nice day,
Minji
Hi Jae min,
답글삭제I absolutely agree your paragraph. The night of Seoul is very convenient and beautiful. However, I want to read specific data in your paragraph. I think that you can find any data in www.kostat,go.kr. It'll be help you.
Have a good day,
Jieun.
Hello Jae min,
답글삭제Your posting is very clear. That makes me understand what you said at glance. Then, I realize emphasize the order of reason is obvious and good method to attract reader. However, I think you should use outsource like graph or charts because rubric for mid-term said we need to use that. Then, why don't you add more information if you have the time? I wish you are helped. Thank you for your posting.
-HanDaUl